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In my mind there are many things
Pale broken dolls in faded torn lace
Cold laughing jesters and young girls with wings.
In my mind there are many things.

Look here darling, this is where you reside.
Amongst the big balloons in a coral colored space.
A place full of smiles and hearts stripped of pride
Look here darling, this is where you reside.

Cradle me in your arms and give me a home.
I need your warmth to thaw my frozen bones.
Left cold in the rain, left out in the gloam
Cradle me in your arms and give me a home.

Thum-bada-bum-bum
Put your head on my chest and a heart you will hear.
Come, see that I am alive, come see that I am real.  Come.  Come.
Thum-bada-bum-bum
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thum-bada-bum-bum................


a try at rhyming...
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~x0x0paperdolls0x0x:iconx0x0paperdolls0x0x: May 15, 2008, 4:04:20 PM
woot! i love poetry! this is awesome.
i saw yours on the "new" deviations
and it interested me.
i like it!

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i don't know... i don't know...
what should i put here?!
it's so confusing.... oh well
~Abloomith:iconAbloomith: May 15, 2008, 4:21:01 PM
Ah, this is wonderful. It really does paint a kind of toybox picture of your heart.

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Stop looking at my signature. Now. Yes, you. Stop it now. I know you aren't stopping. Stop, you. Stop looking at my signature. Yeah, now. Stop it. Because I know you aren't stopping. I can read minds you know. You're not stopping. Stop. Now.
~xglassgalaxyx:iconxglassgalaxyx: May 15, 2008, 4:47:53 PM
thankyou! and thankyou so much for the fave!

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One mile is just as far as one thousand if you can't bridge that distance.
~xglassgalaxyx:iconxglassgalaxyx: May 15, 2008, 4:48:15 PM
thankyou!

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One mile is just as far as one thousand if you can't bridge that distance.
~totallyfai:icontotallyfai: May 15, 2008, 5:04:01 PM
NO idea wat that meant
but...........
C}:(
ok

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Chill
~xglassgalaxyx:iconxglassgalaxyx: May 15, 2008, 5:32:24 PM
youre the most unpoetic person ive ever met. if you dont get it in the least bit then why bother commenting?

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One mile is just as far as one thousand if you can't bridge that distance.
~MorticiaRose:iconMorticiaRose: May 15, 2008, 5:47:25 PM
I think this is a great poem, I really wish mine were this good!

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"It was night, and the rain fell; and falling, it was rain, but, having fallen, it was blood."

MorticiaRose
~xglassgalaxyx:iconxglassgalaxyx: May 15, 2008, 6:54:31 PM
aww thank you so much that really means a lot to me! :hug:

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One mile is just as far as one thousand if you can't bridge that distance.
~totallyfai:icontotallyfai: May 16, 2008, 1:24:38 PM
cxuase it has the word jester in it and i LOVE

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Chill